This hobo has eyes
like empty snow globes
the scenery is still there
but it just doesn't seem to sparkle
as Sahara desert lips part at an oasis
slowing drying up like curbside puddles
mixed with dreams and gasoline
forming urban rainbows mirrored on his t-shirt
in blood stains
cheeto stains
mustard stains
grass stains
and an unidentifiable splotch of something
vaguely blue like his eyes but brighter
then his voice fills the air like a tree
tipping over slowly creaking and cracking
then a rumble and THUD:
Do you have any spare change?
without hesitation comes:
No sorry-
I can tell when his sigh sort of sounds
like a pigeon that he's not sure I'm honest
I can tell three steps later when I pat my pockets
that I'm not sure either














Comments
again, i like this. you've such a wonderful use of imagery
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Super perfundo on the eve of your day
I don't really like the 13th line though. Something about it throws off the wobble of the poem. It's the word "something" I'm sure. Every thing else in the poem feels so concrete, even if it's vague.
I saw a homeless guy approach a nun the other day and she told him that she had no change either. I though it was weird. Not that nuns don't carry money, or don't have pockets to put things in, but that she turned away a homeless man with a simple "no."
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A well described, commonly experienced moment. I like it like this.
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"Information is not knowledge. Knowledge is not wisdom. Wisdom is not truth. Truth is not beauty. Beauty is not love. Love is not music. Music is the best." -Frank Zappa
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"I was once praying to God and suddenly realized I was talking to myself."
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