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Winter Blues Haikus of Love by ~cool4dude:iconcool4dude:



Winter Blues Haikus 3: Haiku of Love

I
Bright windburned cheeks
hide behind a scarf as red.
I know you're smiling.

II
A snowball strikes me.
Retaliation is swift:
a tackle and kiss.

III
Warm breath 'gainst my lips
could cure hypothermia
when the breath is yours.

IV
Gloves grasp together
rubbing in primal passion,
struggling for warmth.

V
The backyard angels
leave a glacial impression;
steal snowflake kisses.

VI
Your love's a blizzard
covering my heart in snow.
I'll put my boots on.

VII
I see your footprints
heading away from my house
falling snow fills them

VIII
Sultry stinging wind
pecks my cheek indifferently-
We're getting divorced.

IX
Icicle heartbreak:
One by one they plummet down
because of lost love.

X
Three stacked snowy spheres:
dark coal eyes search the sky for
someone to melt with...
©2009 ~cool4dude
:iconcool4dude:

Author's Comments

I will be the first to admit that this is the worst of my Winter Blues Trilogy. The reasons for this are two-fold. 1) I am really struggling to write right now, I will definitely admit that. 2) Love is one of the harder things for me to express.

Anyway, I meant to have this up for Valentines day... but I didn't. Oh well.

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:iconpeacefrogo0o0o:
i really like I though VI

--
"unholy battered old thing you were, my sunflower O my soul, i love you then!"
-Allen Ginsberg, "sunflower sutra"
:iconcool4dude:
thanks, I appreciate that :)

--
:cheese: Somebody should go stand with the cheese...it's alone :cheese:

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