.
This poem is just a paper airplane
waiting to soar across the room,
do a loop, and then crash into
the garbage can
..
If words were people,
this city would be
uninhabited.
...
Ellipses take the place
of things which haven't yet
revealed themselves to me,
like stunt doubles
in a movie with no actors.














Comments
You forgot the 'b' in thumbsup.
In your Author's Comments.
You may or may not be worthy of critiquing,
but I am not worthy of any critiques I may post.
I'll stick with a simple "I like it,"
Hope that's okay with you.
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